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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Some people believe that zoos serve useful functions.
Other people believe that it is cruel and wrong to confine animals in zoos.
Tell which point of view you agree with and explain why, using specific details and reasons.
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No one can deny that animals in zoos are trapped and raised just for human being.
Some people say that it is cruel and selfish.
However, I am against this opinion for two reasons.
First, what we're doing is not just to confine animals.
We help them to give a birth. We feed them, and raise them with love.
If we haven't done it, I think lots of animals might have been extinct.
We don't need to regard it as a negative thing.
Look at the bright side, then you can see that it's good for both of us.
Animals can be protected by attack from hunter, and people can be protected by attack from hungry beast.
Second, zoos serve useful functions, especially as a good education tool.
As a matter of fact, It could be an opinion just for people.
However, it is too obvious to deny that zoos influence children in a good way.
If we don't have zoos in our life, we can never see that kind of animals, like tiger, lion or even rabbit.
The more our life has developed, the more our perceptions have underdeveloped.
For our improvement, I think we should keep managing zoos in our life.
For these reasons, I agree with that zoos serve useful functions.
It will be profitable for people and animals forever as for as zoos exist. | |
No one can deny that animals in zoos are trapped and raised just for human beings.
Some people say that it is cruel and selfish.
However, I am against this opinion for two reasons.
First, what we're doing is not just to confine animals.
We help them to give a birth. We feed them, and raise them with love.
If we haven't done it, I think lots of animals might have been extinct.
We don't need to regard it as a negative factor (things 도 되지만 formal 하지 안아서요~) thing.
Look at the bright side, then you can see that it's good for both of us.
Animals can be protected by possible attacks from hunters, and people can be protected by attack from hungry beasts.
Second, zoos serve useful functions, especially as a good education tool.
As a matter of fact, it could be an opinion just for people.
However, it is too obvious to deny that zoos influence children in a good way.
If we don't have zoos in our life, we can never see that kind of animals, like tigers, lions or even rabbits.
The more our life has developed, the more our perceptions have underdeveloped.
For our improvement, I think we should keep managing zoos in our life.
For these reasons, I agree with that zoos serve useful functions.
It will be profitable for people and animals forever as for as zoos exist.