■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and to reduce stress is to spend time alone.
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Many people think that spending time alone is the best way to relax and reduce stress. Of course, It is one of the good way to these purpose. However, I truly believe that the best way to relax and to reduce stress is spending time with other person because of two reasons : get useful advice and release their emotion effectively.
To begin with, people can get good and useful advice by communicate with other people who are intimate with them such as friends or sibling. It is because that these intimate people can see problem objectively. From my experience, when I was high school student, I had trouble studying to enter the university becuase I felt that my grade was always same although I had studied very hard. But I could change my mind by communicating my older sister and teacher who indicated to me the fact that this problem was made because of my negative thinking. So with their helpful advice, I could overcome my problem and successfuly enter the university.
In addition, spending time with other person is the more effective than spending time alone since it can encourage people to release their emotion effectively. If people who have trouble spended time alone, this way makes it easy to accumulate stress and trouble in their mind. For example, when I had problem with my friend, I used to spend time alone with listening music, watching movie. However after I spend time with other person, I found that second way is better becuase I can release my emotion and sort out my thoughts by talking to other person and listening what they speak.
To sum up, I strongly believe that spending time with other person is better way than spending time alone. If you have a problem, choose a way that spending time with others. It will be the best way to reduce your stress and relax yourself. | |
시간 정확히 재서 시험처럼 써 봤습니다. 시험이 얼마 안 남았어요ㅠ 처음 올리는건데 잘 못 된 부분 지적좀 해 주세요ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ 헉 쓰고보니까 조금 아웃토픽인 것 같네요;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; 이런;;;;;;; 이렇게 쓰면 몇 점 정도 나올 수
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