■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Watching television is of no value for children. | |
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Since the last century, watching television has become a routine for almost every person. By watching television, people could obtain the most updated information as well as amusement. However, I believe watching television is not benefit for children because children need to study and develop on their talents.
To begin with, television is not valuable for children. In fact, it is more like a poison on children. During the childhood, children need to develop themselves physically. Since their body keep grows until high teen, outdoor activities are important factor on growth. For example, it seems that playing basketball helps children to become tall. Also, young can learn new things easily. Therefore if they keep practicing for some specific sports, one day they might find it interesting or talents. If that is the case, the child’s dream would be set for a famous athlete. If children spend too much time watching television, without going outside and do some exercise, it will cause a health problem.
Next, children need to focus on their time in studying. As I have mentioned above, children grows during the childhood. However, their growth is not only limited in their body. Their mental grows as well. I know that some programs such as “National Geography” actually help children to learn, but only small number of children watch it. Since it is documentary which is too rigid and serious, children rather choose to watch less serious programs such as animations or dramas which are very addictive. After watching those invaluable materials for long time without learning, they will just slack off compare with the others who read books.
Childhood is one of the most important periods for people because children grow physically as well as mentally. As a result, instead of spending their time watching those useless programs on television, I believe they should find more productive activities such as reading or exercise to develop their potential for future. | |
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