Question: Do you agree or disagree with the
following statement? with the help of the Internet, students can learn more
effectively. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Answer:
After the Internet is utilized by many people in various fields, some
people cast doubt on the trend. They think the Internet is full of inaccurate
information and bad people, and they say we should not use the Internet
for some important occasions like testing and voting. On the other hand, the
Internet is still upgraded and moderated by many professionals and users. What
those people say is that there is no limitation on the Internet, and it is
making people more and more convenient to live their daily life. I think this
positive side of the Internet benefits students as well; the Internet
helps students study their subjects more efficiently and it provides
newly-created information.
To begin with, students can save their time and energy while studying.
Nowadays, the Internet is extremely fast and is at hand in many places.
Therefore, students do not need to spend time and money on visiting libraries
or buying books. If we did not have the Internet, we would have to visit
libraries or research centers even for simple homework assignments. For
example, I was benefitted by the Internet when studying TOEFL(Test of English
as a foreign language). When I had to study for PBT, which is also known as
Paper Based Test, I bought many thick books and had to go private tutoring
institutions to learn. However, after the test changed to the Internet Based
Test, I can study TOEFL just by purchasing practice tests online and practicing subjects
with my laptop using the Internet. Also, I can learn from others through the
Internet by sharing know-how or checking others’ essay writings or speaking
answers.
Moreover, the Internet provides students with brand-new information. The Internet is filled with new information because millions of people all over the world edits and uploads information on the Internet every second. As a result, students can be informed about those new facts immediately. On the contrary, some books are old and makes people believe old facts. I am one of people who made a mistake by old information. When I was given a homework assignment about studying Internet expressions and abbreviations, I visited a library beside my home to make my result perfect and believable. However, all the expressions I found were 90s’ Internet expressions. As a result, many friends laughed at me and bullied me that I am an old man. Like this incident shows, new information from the Internet is needed in many subjects these days.
To sum up, as students can study more efficiently and can get new information, the Internet is effecting students very positively. Even though the Internet can be harmful for the young, it is absolute that it is beneficial for academic purposes.
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