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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay. | |
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Nowaday, most of learning process pass off in the school. We can learn not alone studies like mathematic and science but means of living together like social skills and manners. And we learn most of them from teacher. In my opinion, today's learning process is not wrong. I agree that it is always better to have a teacher. There are two reasons why I agree it.
First of all, teachers can teach our according to the procedures. They already completed a course of pedagogy. Therefore, they're know what they teach or why it should be teached. Suppose we learned something by ourselves. Maybe we missed out something important to learn them. Even if we get knowledges all about that, they might be mixed up, because we didn't learn them according to the procedures.
In addition, teachers knows much more than us about teaching subject. They have researched their major subject for long times. Besides, they have experience much more than our. All of point, they are one step ahead than we. For example, in my experience, when I had a question about science. I couldn't understand about the certain phenomena. However, teacher gave me the answer easily. He knew the principle of phenomena and described them.
Comparing to learn by themselves, To learn for teachers is more rational. They know more than us, and they can help us. All things consider, it is always better to have a teacher. | |
Nowadays, most of the learning process pass off in the (pass off? 이 부분이잘 이해가 안가네요) school. We can learn not alone studies like (not alone studies 가 뭔지 잘 모르겠네요) mathematics and science but means of living together like social skills and manners. And we learn most of them from teachers. In my opinion, today's learning process is not wrong. I agree that it is always better to have a teacher. There are two reasons why I agree with this idea it.
First of all, teachers can teach our us according to the procedures. They already completed a course of pedagogy. Therefore, they're (“they’re”는 they are 을 묶어놓은 말이니깐요 여기서는 they 가 더 적합해요) they know what they teach or why it should be teached. Suppose we learned something by ourselves sell studied, maybe this may give a higher chance of leaving we missed out something important that should have been learned them. Even if we get have everything we need to know about a certain subject matter knowledges all about that, they might be mixed up, because we didn't learn them according to the procedures.
In addition, teachers know much more than us about teaching subject. They have researched their major subject for long times in depth. Besides, they have much more experience much more than our we do. All of point, they are one step ahead than we are. For example, in my experience, when I had a question about science I couldn't understand about the a certain phenomena. However, my teacher gave me the answer easily. He knew the principle of that phenomena and described them it to me.
Compared to to learn by themselves self studying, having an expert to help you out is more beneficial more rational. They know more than us, and they can help us. All things considered, it this is always why it is better to learn from a teacher.