Personally, I strongly agree with this statement that people have personal time to truly relax and to reduce stress for the following two reasons. First, without considering others, second one is that people can have privacy.
First of all, if we have personal time, we don’t have to consider others.
These days, most of people are born and raised without siblings.
Therefore, a lot of groups, such as school, company, push us to have great time with variety of people.
The problem with this is that having broaden relationships are pretty arduous work. It makes people be exhausted.
Thus, people must have personal time without consideration about others.
According to the survey recently released by the Korea Ministry of Labor show precise data about having personal time. There are 79% people who have satisfaction when they spend time alone. On the other hand, just 21% people who feel comfortable want to spend time with others such as family.
Based on this survey, most of people feel comfortable and satisfaction when they spend time alone.
In addition, people can have privacy.
Over time, today’s people are apt to more and more individualized.
However, they are observed by a lot of surveillance camera reasons for social security. It causes enormous stress to people.
Therefore, people need privacy desperately for their stability of mind, physical.
To be specific, lets see in detail ordinary office worker Mr. Han.
Mr. Han works in Samsung. During work time, he was observed by surveillance camera in his office. On the way to back home, he also observed by camera in transportation. After getting off the transportation, he walks the way that have security camera for safety of communities.
Through Mr. Han’s daily life, he really doesn’t have little personal time.
It makes him to have extreme tension and be exhausted to his life.
In conclusion, people who live in modern society really don’t have privacy or personal time. The time for just oneself elevates one’s quality of lives. |
Personally, I strongly agree with this statement that people have to have personal time to truly relax and to reduce stress for the following two reasons. First, without considering others you will not get bothered by others (아니면 we do not have to care about others), second one is that people can have privacy.(주제1&2가 같아보이는데…저만 그런가요?)
First of all, if we have personal time, we don’t have to consider others.
These days, most of people are born and raised without siblings.
Therefore, a lot of groups, such as school, company, push us to spend have great time with variety of people.
The problem with this is that having broaden relationships are is a pretty arduous work. It makes people become exhausted.
Thus, people must have personal time without having to consider others. consideration about others.
According to the survey recently released by the Korea Ministry of Labor, it shows precise data about having personal time. There are 79% of people who have satisfaction when they spend time alone. On the other hand, just 21% of people who feel comfortable wants to spend time with others such as family.
Based on this survey, most of people feel comfortable and satisfaction when they spend time alone.
In addition, people can have privacy.
Over time, today’s people are apt to more and more individualized. Nowadays people are becoming more and more individualized.
However, they are observed by a lot of surveillance cameras reasons for social security purposes. It causes enormous stress to people.
Therefore, people need privacy desperately for their stability of mind and physical state.
To be specific, let’s see in detail an ordinary office worker Mr. Han.
Mr. Han works in Samsung. During work time, he was is observed by a surveillance camera in his office. On the way to back home, he is also observed by cameras in transportation. After getting off the transportation subway, he walks the way that have security camera for safety of communities and is still surrounded by surveillance cameras.
Through Mr. Han’s daily life, he really doesn’t have little barely any personal time.
It makes him to have extreme tension and be exhausted to his life.
In conclusion, people who live in the modern society really don’t have privacy or personal time. The time for just oneself elevates one’s quality of life.
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