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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Many parents try to determine their children's futures. Some argue that the children should make their own choices. | |
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There are many various choices throughout people’ lives and they should decide matters discreetly to produce the best result for their futures. Some people argue that allowing parents to decide children’s futures is more beneficial to them because parents have more experiences than their children. On the other hand, others suggest that children should make their own decision regarding their future careers. I strongly agree with the latter since teenagers are able to have much responsibility and they can choose what fits in their interest.
To begin with, determining their own futures enables children to increase their sense of responsibility. They will encounter countless events as they grow up such as university, jobs and marriage partners. If their parents decide their children’s futures on their own, children may blame for unfavorable outcomes. On the other hand, if the bad results were due to children, they will be responsible for their choices. For example, when students apply for universities, some parents force their children to enter into a good school what they like, not considering the children’s opinions. As a result, some children may not have enjoyable school life and blame their parents. Thus, parents should let their children to select choices and this will lead to a greater responsibility.
In addition, youngsters are able to decide matters that suit their interest the most. They are aware of their talents and interest than any other people, so they can choose what they are willing to do. This will bring happier lives and result in better academic achievement. For instance, students choose their majors at universities. They would consider their aptitudes and select the most optimal major for them, thus attending the universities will be more enjoyable and they will be more enthusiastic in their studies. Therefore, children are happier when they choose what they are interested in. To take all these things into account, students should make own decisions for their futures rather than relying on their parents. They can improve their responsibility by taking actions to the unexpected results. Also, they can have more exciting life after choosing matters they love to do. Therefore, it is better for children to make decisions for their futures rather than parents deciding their upcoming events. | |
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