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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Not so long ago, it was very hard to witness people of poor countries eating a large amount of corns. Today, however, thanks to the technique of Genetically Modified Organisms, or GMO, they can be supplied with lots of corns. Some people consists insist that GMO should be banned, while others argue that it should be permitted. From my perspective, the GMO technique should be extended because this innovative biotechnology has allowed us to do things that we haven't been able to do before-especially in the area of cropland management. Crops can become resistant to factors that prevent growth (preventing growth), which eventually leads to the solution of famine. Also, a nation is able to make interest by trading GMO crops.
First of all, studying and producing GMO will give significant helps to get over hard conditions for crops cultivation. There are some barriers that prevent organisms' growth, such as insects, diseases, and environmental disasters. However, if we control the genes of organism, it these will have endurance to those factors. (it 이 유전자를 가리키는 것같아서)
It means that people will be able to increase the yield of plants and fruits by GMO techniques. In addition, there are some nations of which environmental circumstances are originally bad for crops cultivation. Using GMO techniques may cause not only the increasing increase in of crop, but also the solving solution to/for of famine. (제가 알고 있기론 명사로 쓸수 있는 단어는 이런식으론 쓰이지 않는다고 알고 있어요)
Furthermore, cultivating certain crops in financial planning will bring nation a competitiveness in world trade market. A crop of high efficiency in growth will be popular among countries, so that a nation of better GMO techniques will make a lot of interest in the world market. For instance, some developed countries such as U.S and Canada have been starting trading GMO with other countries. They export genetically modified corns, and tomatoes to earn large profit yearly.
To conclude, GMO is a good way to solve varies various problems in modern society. Modified characters of crops make it possible for them to adapt to any circumstances to have a good harvest. Besides, it creates national wealth. Thanks to GMO techniques, people can experience revolution in agriculture and economy. Therefore, I agree with the idea of producing GMO foods.
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