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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : The most important thing for government to improve health care is to clean the environment. | |
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These days, the governments are more likely to pay attention to medical policy to improve health care. Some people claims that the most important thing for government to should do is to clean the environment. However, I disagree with the given statement for the following reasons. First, investing more money to medical industry by government is more important. Moreover, knowing the importance of right treatment by people is important too.
To begin with, government should invest more money to medical industry. This is becaus some novelty medical inventions save a thousand of million people. And this crucial medical inventions are generated when there are enough fund aided by government. Recent studies have shown that countries which are strongly supporting medical R&D by amount of money are more likely to have advanced health care systems and low rate of death by deadly dieseas. In this regard, it is evident that government investing money to medical field is more important.
In addition, the government should announce the importance of health-habit to people. It might be impossible to make a perfect environment by cleaning them. So, appropriate pre-measures to avoid dieseas are more important to sustain advanced health care. For instance, my sister was easy to be sick. When she went to hospital, the doctor said the dieseas was prevented easily when they make a wash hands. At that time, the doctor argued that the government should announce this imformation to people by public advertisement. As this illustrate well, the appropriate imformation which should be delivered to public is more important than cleaning the environment.
In conclusion, I still believe that cleaning environment is not enough to improve health care for some reasons. First, the advanced medical industry supported by government is more important. Not only that, the suitable announcement about medical imformation to people is more improtant too.
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These days, the governments are more likely to pay attention to medical policy to improve health care. Some people claim that the most important thing for a government to should do is to clean the environment. However, I disagree with the given statement for the following reasons. First, investing more money to the medical industry by government is more important. Moreover, knowing the importance of right treatment by people is important too.
To begin with, government should invest more money to the medical industry. This is because some novelty medical inventions save a thousands of to millions of people. And these crucial medical inventions are generated when there is enough funds aided by the government. Recent studies have shown that countries which are strongly supporting medical R&D by amount of money are more likely to have advanced health care systems and low rate of death by deadly diseases. In this regard, it is evident that government investing money to medical field is more important.
In addition, the government should announce the importance of health-habits to people. It might be impossible to make a perfect environment by cleaning them. So Therefore, appropriate pre-measures to avoid dieseas diseases are more important to sustain advanced health care. For instance, my sister was easy to be got easily sick. When she went to the hospital, the doctor said the dieseas disease was prevented easily when they make a wash hands. At that time, the doctor argued that the government should announce this information to the public people by public through advertisements. As this illustrates well, the appropriate information which should be delivered to the public is more important than cleaning the environment.
In conclusion, I still believe that cleaning the environment is not enough to improve health care for some reasons. First, the advanced medical industry supported by government is more important. Not only that, the but because suitable announcements about medical information to people is more important too.