■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. | |
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These days, televisions has destroyed communication among friends and family. We prefer having communications with friends than watching televisions. I, however, believe watching televisions all day long makes 2 negative effects: People spend time watching televisions, Children learn some violent stuff from televisions.
To begin with, people spend too much time watching televisions so they can’t have enough conversations among friends and family. When they watch televisions, they always concentrate watching televisions. Young students often watch televisions as soon as school finishes. Parents will wonder why they are watching televisions so much and soon they will also be addicted to watching it which makes they cannot have enough dialogues between parents and offsprings.
On top of that, televisions teach young children bad languages. I loved watching American dramas like the Detective Monk and the Simpsons. And I easily found that there remains so many swear vocabularies and expressions which are really harmful to children’s emotion. Recommending these kind of drama to my sister is not acceptable for me because it would cause my sister swearing in English or think about swearing.
In conclusion, I’d like all of you check how much time do u spend on watching televisions and find out how many bad expressions you can find. Family and friend’s bond will be gone if you keep watching it and all communications you can do are just staring televisions with your family and friends like sillies. | |
태어나서 처음 써보는건데 엉망이네요. 첨삭좀 해주세요~ㅎ