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Since the society is highly competitive with thousands of prominent figures that one must prevail over, people in these days make tremendous efforts to succeed efficiently. I strongly believe that first impression is important because it tells a lot about people in a moment. It is because first impression reveals one's life style and clothes tell personal statements
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To begin with, first impressions reveal perspectives and attitudes toward life. This is because people's habitual facial expression and speech show their attitude of life. For example, a survey of job interviewers shows that interviewers can tell candidates' personality in a few minutes by checking their face and speech. According to their experience, an optimistic and outgoing person has brighter facial expression, a higher tone of voice, and lively hand gestures and they are more likely to do well with their job after being an employee. When optimistic people meet challenging assignments they can settle it with a happy feeling. However, that's not possible with pessimistic person. So, Therefore(문장 시작할땐 so보다 therefore가 더 좋아요) interviewers pick the positive men by their cool and confidence looking.
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Moreover, clothes reveal personal statements. This is evidenced by a number of ordinary people that 90% of respondents are attracted to well-coordinate, and stylish people. They think clothes serve as a self-expressive uniform to the world so that people are usually interested in style. To illustrate this point, nowadays, lots of young women in Korea catch my eyes by dressing well. As soon as I see look at them, I deeply regret what I'm wearing and I think how others see me. Also, I can guess their personality or career from dress. For instance, If I meet a person who is neat and tidy, I think she/he is a very precise and organized person. On the contrary, If I meet people who is shabbily dressed, I think she/he doesn't care how they dress or they are poor.
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In short, first impression is important because it reveals one's life style and clothes tell personal statements. That's way people care about their appearance. |