▶ Your Answer :
First and foremost, I believe
honest is not the most important characteristic for leader as they need to be
dishonest sometimes. In response to the important role of the leader, my
experience demonstrates how leader sometimes need to be dishonest has to become dishonest (leader는 단수 주어 입니다). For instance, when I was in orchestra, and student leader Tom leads us. At the beginning, our
performance was so poor that we can’t actually perform a concert cannot actually perform (독립형 에세이에서는 줄인말을 서술하면 안됩니다). However, Tom
told each member of the orchestra that we are doing well. to do well The purpose of the
lie was to encourage us. Thanks to Tom, we all get confidence and soon get
skillful at performance. Therefore, honest is not the most important
characteristic for leader.
Moreover, I believe leadership
is the most important characteristic rather than honesty. Understanding the
difficulty that leader face is necessary to substantiate this view. All people
in organization have different idea and it is hard for them to agree with each
other. There are people who even are not interested in their organization. Therefore,
leadership is important characteristic for leader. Leader have to help
organization member to exchange their own opinion and encourage people with
less interest to join in. has to organize member to exchange their own opinion and encourage people with less interest to join.
To sum up, as leaders sometime need to be
dishonest and leadership is important characteristic for them, I believe honest
is not the most important characteristic for being a leader
점수: 20 일단 지금 이 에세이는 인트로가 없습니다. 독립형 에세이에서는 인트로가 아주 중요합니다. 인트로가 중요한 이유는 전체적인 에세이의 방향성을 잡아주는 역할을 하는 것이기 때문에 인트로를 꼭 서술하시길 바랍니다. 또한 지금 이 에세이에서 가장 보여주는 문법적 오류는 단수 복수 주어에 따른 동사 형태입니다. 주의하면서 에세이를 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다.
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