Everyone knows being safe is one of ways to prevent assets, but people should know that being safe is no possibility to get value people want to. Depends on person, value of life is different. Once your value of life is money, and you adhere being safe, there is no method to become millionaire; for instance, people envy winners who won a lottery game which has few probability of win. People usually say the winners were very lucky or the lottery is losing game. Everyone wants to win the lottery, yet only some people buy the lottery. Even though there is only few percentage of winning the game, winner bought the lottery for winning. Being safe which is refers to people, who did not buy lottery, does not have even few possibility of winning. Thus, being safe can not be a good idea.
Moreover, being safe negatively affects people’s ability of development. Sometimes failure far outweighs success because failure causes development our selves because through failure people are able to learn lesson and motivate firm goal. Secure make people to be content with the inside of tumulus; therefore, people neglect their dream. From North Korea, People verify why being safe have highly negative effects. North Korea is one of poorest country which has poverty and starving because their policy is every one secure. North Korean people can not get fire what they do in the company; therefore, no one get motivation that people want to work hard to promote. This reason makes North Korea to suffer the difficulty of economy. In this sense, people need to be challengeable person rather than content person.
Sum up, it seems to be safe is the way not to lose any of people’s assets. In the long run, being safe represents losing our own chances. What people choose is free, yet I completely recommend you had better seize chances that could be only one in your whole life.
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