Some people say that improving schools is the most important for successful development of a country. I agree with this opinion for two reasons. First, great human resources from good school is are a crucial element to succeed of on the state develpmnet. Second, upgrading schools can make a positive effect on economical economic activation through diverse processes to improve their system.
To begin with, human resources raised from improved schools will greatly act to upgrade their countries. In post-industrial society, fully informed people can contribute to variable aspects of society by with developing their abilities and decent good human resources come from decent schools. According to a study done by Seoul National Universtiy, the schools invested financial supports more emitted to produced more leaders who are in high-classes of political world or business sphere field than other schools. For instance, famous persons people such as Barack Obama who is the president of U.S or Ban-Ki-Moon who is a general of U.N are all from prestigious schools. The prestigious schools tremendously stive strive to improve their school system and well-being for their student' future. These efforts have caused many positive results. Through cutting-edged facilities, assertive financial supports and ,famous professors, students can realize their ambition and dream as well as responsibility about their society they live. This is why many countries encourage for schools to better themselves for the future.
Furthermore, upgrading schools can make a positive impact on economy of the country. Many newspapers in my country, Republic of Korea, have reported some articles about school reforms. According to the articles, 10 universities in Seoul started school reform to get more competitiveness and induce make advanced educational system. Through a string of the efforts, the universities made fortunes enormously. As the schools began to remodel their school builings buildings, many construction companies participated in the remodeling. Besides, schools recruited a ton of many competent teachers who have varied certificates and experiences and invested lots of money, so education market was activated. As time went by, the updated schools attracted many smart young students from abroad. This measure method made it possible to earn lots of dollars. Becuase Improved schools have a great attraction to market and academic world have powerful influence to the world with powerful influence, the development of schools can make greatly positive effects on the economy.
In conclusion, I agree that improving schools is are the most important thing for successful development of a country for the reasons that I have mentioned above.
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