■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : study alone VS study with a group of students. | |
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There are largely two type of people’s study style: study alone and study with a group of students. Some prefer to study alone and others want to study with a group of students. Although studying alone has several advantages such as having own study plan and using their time freely, I prefer studying with group of students to studying with together. In my opinion, there are more efficient advantages of studying with a group of students than studying alone. So I want to talk about several advantages of this type of study style.
First of all, members who study in a same study group will stimulate each member. Due to this, students can be more concentrated on study hard. Students need some tension when they study. However, when people are alone, they feel easier and freer than when they stay with other. In the same way, when we study alone, we will relax because there are no competitors. This environment, As a result, connected fallen grades. On the other hands, Study groups are usually composed of students who have a same aim like pass an examination for university. Although students are exhausted with study and want to give up, they reform themselves by seeing other member’s attitude for study and keep their attitude. There is no doubt that this attitude definitely enables them to get good conclusion.
Another reason why I prefer to study as a group is that we can obtain broad view. it is natural that there are problems which we do not know how to solve because we are still learning. Also there are several ways to solve the problem. From my experience, I always discussed the way how to solve the problem with friends when I failed to work out the problem alone. Comparing own opinion about the problem, we tried to resolve the problem with diverse ways. Through the discussion, not only could we solve the problem but also get new ideas which I could not come up with before. If I studied alone, it is clear that I cannot have got diverse views. For these reasons, I strongly believe that studying with group makes students study more efficiently. In addition, it is clear that this efficient study will lead students to get good grade. | |
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