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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
Topic : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. |
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Those who think people have some difficulties to control themself might say that television should destroy communication among friends and family. However I am sure that television has not destroyed the relation between acquaintances, but even improved their conversation. There are two major reasons; humans' ability to manage a time efficiently and to get more information for conversation.
First, we watch TV when we have a spare time. If we have an important schedule, we couldn't enjoy watching TV. someone say Someone says that people ,who like to watch TV, don't want to be join any social gathering because watching TV is the most easiest way to spend time and to have fun. However most people can control their time efficiently, TV is just one kind of fun. When there is no entertainment, some people could be a TV-holic. However everything has changed. It's very hard to find a news that someone who is related with TV-holic. In other words, the affection of TV is limited.
Second, TV gives us many information to be rich our conversation. If there is no TV, our topic for conversations should be only from our normal life. Our life is a kind of cycle and also just repeats repeated . So the role of TV is very important. Through TV, we can get many topics such as a fashion trend, political issues and common sense for humor. (나열하실때 복수면 복수 단수면 단수로 나열해주세요)When we have a conversation, it should be helpful to Varity be varified our talk.
In conclusion, we can control our leisure time efficiently so ,the effect of TV is limited. So Therefore TV couldn't destroy communication among friends and family, but make our conversation rich.
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