■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Our increasing reliance on high-tech gadgets will eventually make us less able to take care of ourselves. |
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Many people have been worrying about the side effect of convenient gadgets. It could be partly true, but ironically, this concern shows that people have been more caring about themselves since they started to worry about side effects on themselves by increasing the number of gadgets. In other words, people started to concern about the gadgets' negative effects and have been trying to prevent or amend some expected or existed those even though our life very relies on high-tech gadgets than ever. To be specific, when people make a high-tech gadget which became a big part of our lives, people try to make them less harmful for human body. Moreover, inventing lots of gadget represents the phenomenon that people have more interest in themselves than any other times. First of all, these days, the market of gadgets is very competitive, so they need a special strategies to attract more customers, most of them are very sensitive about their health and safety. It means that people tend to make and choose some gadgets which are more reliable and safe to their body. For example, two cell phone companies inaugurated brand-new products at the same time in last month. Both have very charming design and amazing functions. At first, it was really hard to figure out which one would be going to get a higher selling record. However, after few days, people started to choose one which was designed to make less electromagnetic waves by using latest technology. Even though it was a very little difference, and other one has special games and more entertainment functions, people wanted to buy one which is better for their body and health. This directly shows that concerning about ourselves increases regardless of the increasing the reliance to convenient of gadgets. Second, people take more care about themselves very much now than they have ever done, and numerous gadgets which have been making and inventing continuously represent this trend. The main purpose of the gadgets is helping people to do work or live easily. To invent gadgets, it requires many knowledges and interest about human and their need for not only producer but also customers. For instance, one of my friends wanted to buy small alarm clock so she searched them. She was very surprised about the variety functions of clocks which are made to fit human's need. Since there were so many options, she had to figure out her needs clearly. In other words, she considered her demand to fit it well to the functions and purposes of the product that she wanted to purchase relatively much more than who in the past. In short, people have to know themselves and their needs more than ever they did to make or choose most fitted one. In conclusion, people rely to convenience of high-tech gadgets with high interesting about themselves. People try to choose better products for their health and need, so they are very concern about themselves. In the future, people are going to depend on the gadgets more and more, and at the same time, they will take care of themselves more and more. | |
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