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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. | |
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Some people regard television as fool's box. Of course thorough(철저한) through many years television has influenced negatively. It causes violent tendency of children and improper sexual knowledge. However it has infinite advantages when it is treated well. Either positively or negatively, television influences people's behavior. Because people tend to believe that things which are suggested in television are right and precise. Moreover television provides informations over and over.
Above all, people consider that news or information in television are surely right and definite. People think that television shouldn't and wouldn't report imprecise information. Thus they recklessly take in information in television. For instance, many people believe television news without appropriate evidence. In fact, television news are sometimes wrong. However people don't care, they just sustain (제 생각엔 accept 가 더 낫지 않을까란 생각이) television's voice. Furthermore many teenagers worship entertainers. Teenagers think that life in television is cool and the lifestyle of the entertainers becomes teenagers' model life. So they try to follow entertainers' behaviors. Like this, most people believe all things in television and want to resemble life shown on in television.
Not only that, television gives people same information repeatly. This effect is absolutely huge. We could watch the same ad over ten times in a day and we finally believe the ad. When a person are is exposed in same impetus, he or she will be accustomed with the impetus. This can be applied for television case. When children watch violent scene over and over, children soon regard that the scene is not tough or violent and there is a possibility for children to behave aggressively. According to a study, there are notable differences between a group that watched a moral and ethical movie and the other group that watched a wild and violent movie. After watching movie, they appreciated same picture. Group members that watching a the moral movie tend to evaluate the picture positively, otherwise the other group members pointed out the picture's defects and were busy to blame. This means what that we watch influences about their our feelings and behaviors.
So like these way, television has impact on people's behavior. Although I mainly suggest television's negative influence above, weather how to use it(이건 왜 쓰였는지 잘 모르겠음), its impacts are different. | |
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