In KOREA, most people say that luck is the most important feature to success. However, I do not agree with this statement because of two major reasons: ‘efforts, skills’ and ‘challenges’. Let me introduce those two reasons below.
First of all, when it comes to efforts, depending on luck is not a good idea. I know some people who won a lottery and they fail to live happily. However, like an old saying, practice makes perfection! For an example, Dr. Gore, a scientist who is well known for ‘GORE TEX’, was working at a company laboratory. At the beginning of his work, he did not intend to make the magical fabric. Most people know that he invented the material by luck. However, you may not deny that he would not find out without his effort to do experiments and ability to analyze the product. Like other scientist, he had enough background information and skills. If he did not try like that, he would not earn those kinds of wealth and honor.
Moreover, as far as strenuous challenges are concerned, the luck would not be the key feature of success. Without those kinds of adventures, luck is just luck as it means. My father, who is a very diligent worker, failed his company more than 5 times. I had to move out twice a year when I was in elementary school. Even though at the age of 55, he started his new job which is oil painting. At first time, the gallery was not good like that, but later on, the gallery getting bigger and bigger. Finally, people recognized him as an impressive artist! In that way, our family’s income also getting better and better.
To sum up, even though luck is important point to live successful lives, without efforts and skills or challenges, we could not think of success. |
In Korea, most people say that luck is the most important feature to success. However, I do not agree with this statement because of two major reasons: efforts, skills and challenges. Let me introduce those two (1.effort 2.skill 3.challenge 세가지 이유 아닌가요?) reasons below.
First of all, when it comes to efforts, depending on luck is not a good idea. I know some people who won a lottery and they fail to live happily. However, like an old saying, practice makes perfection! For an example, Dr. Gore, a scientist who is well known for ‘GORE TEX’, was working at a company laboratory. At the beginning of his work, he did not intend to make the magical fabric. Most people know that he invented the material by luck. However, you may not deny that he would not have discovered this without hard work. find out without his effort to do experiments and ability to analyze the product. Like other scientists, he had enough background information and skills. If he did not try like that, he would not have earned those kinds of wealth and honor.
Moreover, as far as strenuous challenges are concerned, the luck would not be the key feature of success. Without those kinds of adventures, luck is just luck as it means. My father, who is a very diligent worker, failed his company more than 5 times. I had to move out twice a year when I was in elementary school. Even though at the age of 55, he started his new job which is oil painting. At first time, the gallery was not popular good like that, but later on, the gallery getting got bigger and bigger. Finally, people recognized him as an impressive artist! In that way, our family’s income also getting got better and better.
To sum up, even though luck is important point to in life successful lives, without efforts and skills or challenges, we could not think of success. (마지막 부분이 잘 이해가 안가요) |