There are a lot of things we can enjoy regardless of our age. However, it is true that people often could cannot try to do something because of due to their age, because the old people tend to have health problem or less opportunities than young people. So,Therefore(문장 시작할땐 so보다 therefore 가 더좋음) I agree with the idea that the young poeple enjoy life more than the older people do.
First of all, nowadays, a lot of activities we can do required require physical health. Because Since(문장 시작할때 because는 좋지 않습니다) most of the hobbyies hobbies people have such in as hiking, swimming, and even yoga, need to move our body actively. As a result, there are some kind of things that the old people can not easily do. For example, one of my co-workers who is 20 years older than me has heart desese. He wants to go hiking every mornig, but he could cannot. He envied my youth and health at all times, saying, "you have to thank the fact that you can do whatever you want because of your youth." It makes me realize that I am happy just because of my young age, and I need to do something when I can do.
Secondly, I think young people have much more opportunities than the eldery people. Young people have more time to focus on their own than the old people. For example, I have a younger sister who is a university student. She traveled Europe for about a month by herself. On contrary, I have to work during that time, so I couldn't go there together. I really wanted to go, but I do did not have much time to go anyhow. I regret that I did not go a lot of place before I got a job. In this sense, I think young people have less limitation to do than the old people do.
To sum up, young people are physically heathy healthy and have a lot of chances to do than old people. For these reasons, I think they need to consentrate concentrate on their task that they are doing because(문장 시작할때 because는 좋지 않기 때문에 두문장을 이어주세요) the youth does not lasts forever and finally they will also get older. They should know that the fact that there are is nothing more important than time. |