Opinions are divided over whether it is more important to have an ability to related well with others than to study in school or not. Some people say that studying is most important ability to success in a future job. However I strongly believe that ability to relate with others except for studying is more benefical to success in a future job. First, we can broad our mind by improving other skill such as solving-problem skill Second, studying is not directily related to society.
To begin with, we should be broaden our mind by learning other ability such as solving problem skill. Of course, studying is important ability to success in a future job. However, these day, many problem present in our society as a mixture which are related other parts. So we have to improve other ability such as solving problem skill through hand-experience. Take my uncle's experience as an example, he always worked part time job when he was middle school student. One day, his father business bankrupted. Even though he was embrrassed, he solved the finalcial problem with his part time job experience step by step. If he had had not job experience, he could not solve that problem.
On the top of that, studying is not directly related to society. Many people learn more to improve other ability after graduation in university, because studying in university is limited kinds of subject. So, in real society, we need to learn how to naturally absorb in society ..........(중략)
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