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Who is the most effective to young adults? Family? Friends? | |
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Human is the most social animal on the earth. We can`t live alone, it which means that we are always being affected by others. If the degree of influence depends defends on the time terms of contact, I think a person`s family can especially specifically (=구체적으로) effect on their members.
There is an old saying in Korea “ A habit what you got used to when you were a child will remain has remained until your 80s.” This old sentence actually means that a bad habit is hard to be fixed, so don`t be used to the bad habit from the beginning. first. But I want to think this sentence little bit differently. When we were children, we learned a lot of things from our family. It is They are carved in our life pattern, and influence they are influencing our lives either in a whether to drag us to good way or a bad way. For example, my family usually has a nap on Sundays(일요일마다), and I used to have a nap when my parents had one. a nap nNow I live alone but still have to take a nap between 2 PM and 4PM.
Another reason that I think family is more effective on a person`s life, is the long period of time that people spend with family is the longest among time with anybody. Let`s think about this: children grows up and go to the school, they meet lots of friends, but as a year goes by friends around them are changed. However, family is always being nearby, until people are become independent from their the family. It means that family can affect you as the time spent with them is much longer than that spent with friends. much as the time longer than the time with friends.
To sum up, I think family is more effective for a person than friends, because that people learn many things from their family when they were young, and the period of time that people spend with family is the longest. | |
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