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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. | |
지나가다가, 도움이 될까 해서 몇자 적어봅니다. ^^; |
In our society, television is important may essential item. Most people have(own) television at their home, however, they say that television has destroyed communication and harmful children education. On the one other hand, there are some disadvantages, on the other hand, there are many advantages such as providing conversation topic, gaining information. So, I disagree that television has destroyed communication among friends amd family.
First of all, we are accustomed to watching television. Some people watch television while eating. So, when many people meet their friends, they talk about drama and comedy. So, If someone don't watch television, he or she can't talk with their friends these days.
Second, televison provides many much information. Many people's think is (Many people think)that television has many disturbing programs with education. However there are many beneficial programs like documentary and discussion program. For example, I study through EBS channel which is edcational program. This helps grades improvement to me. Also, I often watch discusion chennel with my brother to share ideas.
In conclusion, television enrich poeple's life. It is necessary for people to have think that television helps many aspects. | |
So를 너무 많이 쓰는 것은 좋지 않은 걸로 알고 있어요.