It is often said that hand is most useful method to work. For our hands. People could have shown each person’s thinking with millions of years, and works which performed by hands show that man’s personality and sincerity. However, I believe that the machine is way more effective way to do work by two reasons: machines perform the work faster than doing by hand and it has many ability for work.
First of all, working by machine is faster than by hand. Machines are generalized and people doesn’t feel panic or complicated to use the machine but usually think more convenience. For example, when I was a high school student, there were a team homework in biology class. My team planned to perform the homework by computer and met in on-line messenger. And my friend team;teamB planned to meet at off-line and share the homework each person. Our team met in messenger and performed our homework at internet. It was easy to share our work and we ended our homework successfully. But teamB was failed to even meet face to face since there are people who missed meeting time and place. they didn’t performed their homework perfectly, and finally they got the most bad grade within all team.
Also, machines has many abilities to work with. Working with hands needs more cautious about alphabetical error and dirty which caused by correcting the errors. On the other hand, machines don’t have to worry about these things because it has ability to correct the errors automatically and there are no paper to work with;there are just the machines only.
According to the ministry of education in 2009, most of the school choose to use computer to perform their academical task at home because the computer is easier to do their work in finding some data and sharing them with other students. In seoul(the capital city of Korea),there are 45 high schools which encourage the student to use the computer in performing their homework among fifty schools. this implies that it is more effective way to use machines for work.
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