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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Pet should be teated like family memebers | |
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There is an ongoing debate over whether the hunam treated pets as a family memeber or not. Some people might suggest that pets do not have to be treat as a hunam because it is just an animal. However, on the contrary, I strongly agree that pet must be treated like a family member. The fundamental reason behind this is that pet could make people happy and have a fun together.
First of all, people can share their feeling with pets. This is largely because, pets are usually helpful for people to release stress, calm them dowm and share loneless toegether, just like brothers and sisters. From my experience, when I was in the States for study, I had a little dog, called Lucy. My friend bought me Lucy as a Christmas gift, because I looked really lonely to her. Just like my friend's consideration, Lucy completely helped me to escape from my loneless. Lucy stayed right next to me all the time and slept together. Moreover, she alsways welcomed me when I came back from my school. I started to treat Lucy as my younger sister. If I had not have Lucy, I would have spent very loney life in my apartment by myself. In this repeact, people must treat their pets as their family.
Second, people can hang out with their pets. An important reason behind this is that pet owners alsways spend time with their pets, such as go to hiking together and have a regular exercise. Moreover, people can bring their pets to their trip. From my experience, I tried to strated new excercise, running at the part. I asked my family members, but they could not work out with me because of their busy life. I was so disappointed, so I started to exercise with Lucy. Lucy was really liked to go outside with me, and I had a friend who can walk with me. Unlike my busy family, Lucy always stayed with me. I felt that Lucy is even better than family. Lucy and I spent more time together, and now I cannot image my life without Lucy.
In conclusion, I fimly believe that the pet is also part of family member. Just like family, people can share their feeling with their pets and have a really good time together. Accodingly, the pet sould consider as family members.
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There is an ongoing debate over whether the hunam human should treat pets as a family memeber member or not. Some people might suggest that pets do not have to be treated as a human family member because it is just an animal. However, on the contrary,(however, 또는 on the contrary둘 중 하나만 써야 반복적이지가 않습니다.) I strongly agree that pets must be treated like a family member. The fundamental reason behind this is that pets could make people happy and have a fun together.
First of all, people can share their feelings with pets. This is largely because, pets are usually helpful for people to release stress, calm them dowm down and share loneless toegether loneliness together, just like brothers and sisters. From my experience, when I was in the States for study, I had a little dog, called Lucy. My friend bought me Lucy as a Christmas gift, because I looked really lonely to her. Just like my friend's consideration, Lucy completely helped me to escape from my loneless loneliness. Lucy stayed right next to me all the time and slept together. Moreover, she alsways always welcomed me when I came back from my school. I started to treat Lucy as my younger sister. If I had did not have Lucy, I would have spent a very loney lonely life in my apartment by myself. In this repeact respect, people must treat their pets as their family.
Second, people can hang out with their pets. An important reason behind this is that pet owners alsways always spend time with their pets, such as going to hiking together and have a regular exercise. Moreover, people can bring their pets to their trip. From my experience, I tried to strated start new excercise exercising, running at the part. I asked my family members, but they could not work out with me because of their busy life. I was so disappointed, so I started to exercise with Lucy. Lucy was really liked to go outside with me, and I had a friend who can could walk with me. Unlike my busy family, Lucy always stayed with me. I felt that Lucy is was even better than family. Lucy and I spent more time together, and now I cannot image my life without Lucy.
In conclusion, I fimly firmly believe that the pets are is also part of a family member. Just like family, People can share their feeling with their pets and have a really good time together just like a family. Accodingly Accordingly, the pets sould should be considered as a family member.