■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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0013 (PR) Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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These days it is easy way to go out for dinner because people don't have enough time to prepare and have food. Although this benefit to go out, I prefer to have dinner in my home for family healthiness and financial aspect.
First, eating at home is much more healthier than eating out. If someone decide to make dinner, he or she is able choose menu and knows family's special diet habit. And also sometimes restaurants serve food with bad condition for saving money to purchase grocery and give not enough information about the dishes. For example, Cathy, my host mother when I was staying USA, is such a nice cook. She always try to prepare dinner menu, something healthy and fresh things like rice, fish, and mushroom. So her children, Emma, Beth, and Jane can enjoy really good dinner everyday, not Taco from Tacobell or happy meal from Mc.Donald, which is definitely not. And also one statistics in 2006 from Korean Ministry of Health and welfare show that elementary school students having home meals were in good physical health.
Second, eating out is too much expensive. People have to pay the price on menu and also tip for server when they go out for a meal. To save money, it is the best way to have dinner at home. For instance, last summer semester, I started to pack my lunch from home instead of going restaurants because I spend much money buying some cosmetics. At first, it was a little weird for me to change my habit, but it was worth. I reduced almost the half of my usual meal expenses from that and I could use my allowance well. And one of my friend wanted to join with me. After the semester, we were both happy.
In conclusion, for healthiness, people should eat home meals because they can choose healthy ingredients and the menu. And also people spend less money for having home meals. For these reasons I mentioned above, I strongly believe there are no restaurants better than home. | |
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