■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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There are many museum that represent there region or country like 'Museum of Louvre', 'British Museum'. And it is usually loved by tourists. Why do they visit the museum? There are two reason about it.
First of all, Museum is a space that shows a characteristic of regional culture. There are many relic, about reqional culture or history, in the museum. Through visiting them, tourists can receive a history of a new place indirectly. It helped understanding unique culture that someone feel strange. For example, traveler who visited Korea at first, may have a question why Korean hate Japan. But, if he goes to the museum of Korean history about Japanese occupation period, it would be solved.
In addition, Sometimes, an well-known artifact has attracted a lot of visitors in the museums. Many people visit the Museum of Louvre in Paris in order to see 'Mona Lisa' directly. And many people visit the Metropolitan Museum in New York in order to see 'Sunflower' too. People wants to see the masterpiece directly because it strike fire from the heart. So they visit a museum and feel it.
In conclusion, museum preserves cultural heritages of humanity and display them. Therefore visiting a museum give many benefit for tourist, whether they have intention or not. | |
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