I agree that young people should try several different jobs till they find what they would like to have. Some people may say that experiencing various jobs for a long time is ineffective to prepare their future. However, various experiences in different fields help enter a the company what they want to enter. Also they could choose what they really want to jobs they really want through various experiences.
First of all, various experiences in a field help enter a company where what they want to enter. Some people may mention that It is not essential to enter companies. However, nowadays, job competition and market competition is becoming more intense and fierce. harder and harder. Also competition between companies in market is harder and harder. Naturally, companies want to applicants who have experienced company`s works to make the company more competitive. strength competition. Thus, internship is necessary to enter the companies. Let me take one of my friend's case for example. He experienced not only various field of works but also internships when he was a freshman the first year in college. When he was a senior student, he easily entered the company what he wanted.
Second, they could choose what they really want to do jobs through various experiences. When most high school students and college students in Korea spent a lot of time studying on study. High school students take took time on to prepare preparing for college admission and also college students spend most of their had a lot of time studying their major. college study. Thus, they have had little time on thinking what they really want to do in the future. Thus, many experiences which worked in various fields could help to choose their jobs. In addition, they could both build a know-how, career and broaden their social networks through several different jobs.
In conclusion, I agree that young people should try several different jobs till they find what would like to have. It is because various experiences in various fields will help enter a company what they want to enter. Also they could choose what they really want to do jobs through various experiences.
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