■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : People should try several differenct jobs before getting a long-term job.
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An ongoing debate exists over whether people should take part in several different jobs before getting a long-term job.
Some people say that people do not have to participate in some different jobs as it is a waste of time. Of course, working in many fields may have a negative effect on people. But it cannot exceed benefits of various jobs due to the fact that various jobs enable people to experience a variety of thing and people can choose the best jobs that they want.
To begin with, people can experience various experiences. It is common for people who have a long-term job not to know different fields on the grounds that they do not experience a tremendous amount of things. In addition, people of having one job in their whole life are limited to get various experiences because they spend their most time working at their workplace so they have no choice to experience different things. A recent study conducted by Korea University has shown that people who had obtained colorful experiences before choosing a long-term job would tend to more enjoy life on the grounds that a various experience enables them to get several unique experiences. However, people of spending the majority of time with one job tend to be less happy because they are always the same work, which make them tedious.
Furthermore, many experiences enable people to choose best job in their life. It is no secret that people who get experiences of different fields before getting long-term jobs can obtain the better jobs because different jobs help people to distinguish what they like from what they dislike. Not only that, these people tend to be content with their job because they do work they want. For example, when I was an undergraduate student, I thought what I would like to want in my future. So I decided to get many different things through a various jobs. As a result, I could find what I want to in whole life, which could enable me to feel extremely happy during my life. However, my friend, Min-Su, as soon as graduating from university, got a long-term job without various experiences. So he had often trouble working at their workplace because he did not consider his ability before choosing the job.
On the whole, it is necessary for people to experience a variety of jobs before getting long-term jobs because these experiences can help people to choose better jobs and assist them to get many different enjoyable things in their life.
All things considered, it is better to go through various jobs before doing long-term jobs. | |
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