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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Young people enjoy life more than older people. | |
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It seems that young people enjoys their life more than older people do because young people tend to be healthier and more energetic. However, in my point of view, older people take pleasure in their life more because of their enough money to use and wealth of experience.
To begin with, older people usually own much money to lead a dilettante life. Older people saved much money in their early age so that they don’t need to worry about the cost they need to enjoy their hobby. On the contrary, young people should save money for their future as they don’t know what will happen. For example, my uncle loves travelling. When he was young, he couldn’t go to journey. However, after he saved enough money and retired, he made a world travel.
Another reason is that older people have better knowledge about themselves because they got through abundant experience. One can’t know what one enjoys most before one pass through varied experience. Older people are the one who passed through varied experience. It’s reasonable to think that older people know how to enjoy life better. For example, my friend, Kim told me that before she went to the dance club, she had no idea of the pleasure that dance brought to her.
To sum up, older people have much money and better knowledge for themselves. For this reasons, I believe that older people enjoy their life more than young people do. | |
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It seems that young people enjoy their life more than older people do because young people tend to be healthier and more energetic. However, in my point of view, older people take pleasure in their life more because of their enough money to use and wealth of experience.
To begin with, older people usually own much money to lead a dilettante life. Older people saved much money in their early age so that they don’t need to worry about the cost they need to enjoy their hobby. On the contrary, young people should save money for their future as they don’t know what will happen. For example, my uncle loves travelling. When he was young, he couldn’t go to on a journey. However, after he saved enough money and retired, he traveled around the world made a world travel.
Another reason is that older people have better knowledge about themselves because they got through abundant experience. One can’t know what one enjoys most before one pass through varied experience. Older people are the one who passed through varied experience. It’s reasonable to think that older people know how to enjoy life better. For example, my friend, Kim told me that before she went to the dance club, she had no idea of the pleasure that dance brought to her.
To sum up, older people have much money and better knowledge for about themselves. For these reasons, I believe that older people enjoy their life more than young people do.