Some people say that learnig from those in the same level is better than learning from those in higher levels. I disagree with this opinion for two reasons. First, people will not be able to fix their mistakes if they are with people in the same level. Second, they lack the reliable and accurate information. First, same faulty may is originated. Second, reliablity and accuracy about information is lack.
Most of all, If someone learn by fellow or friend who has same abilities related to their objective, identical mistakes misses can be made. Some people may think that learning from those in the same level is conveninent because they can communicate easily regardless of social obstacles. However, If you want to succeed, you should will learn study from someone in a higher level as they have know-how about faulty. Let me take my experience for an example. When I was a senior in my high school, I had a hard time studying to enter the a prestigious college. In order to study effectively, I organized a study group composed of some friends of mine. As time went by, I realized that we were never developed. We always advised each other and shared information related to our text books. Although we did our best, we missed the same parts and wasted a lot of time. time was very wasted, also. One day, I called my brother who graduated from Seoul University that ,the best university in my country. After talking with my brother, I could know why I always missed the same part.아니면 After talking to my brother, I understood what I had have always missed. same portion. If I continued studying with my friends, questioned and learned continuously with my friends, I would have never known knowed my problems. This shows that learning from person in higher level is effective to correct their faulty.
Furthermore, learning from people in same level is dangerous becuase they do not have the reliable and accurate information you need to learn. not reliability and accuracy about information you want. There are numerous articles that deal with unsuccessful stock investment as incorrect information. When people decide greatly important decision, they need a help. However, if the help is from friends or novices like you, it is not helpful/reliable. you will not reliable. When I did an intership in a major newspaper company, I investigated some law-suit about a smuggle. I didn't have any ideas with about this accident, so I called for my co-worker to ask answer some questions. My co-worker told me much many information and even taught me know-how about an interview method. (이문장으로 보면 coworker가 상당히 도움이 된 거 같은데 뒷 문장과 논리가 안맞아요 ;) Eventually, I failed to write the article becuase his advise was is useless. At that time, if I questioned my mentors or professional journalists, I could have written wrote a good article. In this sense, learning from people in the same level is not a good choice.
In conclusion, I disagree that learning from those in the same level is better than learning from those in higher levels for the reasons that I have mentioned.
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