> > 2010-07-14 21:41:08, '' 님이 쓰신 글입니다. ↓
상당히 시간이 오래걸리네요. 여러 표현을 쓰면서 제대로 설명하기가 참 힘든 주제인것 같습니다. Body2개도 잘 나오지 않구요. 이전에 서로 다른 news sources로 부터 정보를 얻어야 한다.(제대로 정보를 전달받기 위해) 찬성/반대 에 대한 주제에 대해서 찬성의 입장으로 썼는데, 약간 다른 내용이라는 생각에 다시 생각을 해서 써보려니까 잘 안되네요. 많은 의견 부탁드립니다.
■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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The news media is a reliable source of unbiased information
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There is an ongoing debate over the pros and cons of the reliability of the news media. Some people believe that the news media tell us a wide variety of information in an objective viewpoint. However, I am against this stance because the information delivered by the news media could be distorted or biased in many ways.
To begin with, the news media sometimes conveys the information in an extremely sensational way. Nowadays, there are many private companies playing the role of news media and they try to maximize their profit to defeat other competitive companies. In order to draw people’s attention, the companies deliver more sensational news or extremely swelled information. Also, we can easily see a lot of surmised news. As long as the purpose of these companies is making more money, the credibility of information from the news media cannot be guaranteed.
However, even assuming the above reasons are plausible, some may argue that even though the news media just supplies somewhat modified facts, they are still facts exactly. Yet, I still put an emphasis on my idea because there is one more important matter to consider.
The news media is closely related to many stake holders. They can be connected with a government, other private companies. This makes it difficult to deliver information in an objective way. Not only sometimes distorts the news media a lot of social facts in order to avoid to be persecuted by a government, but also it modifies intentionally in order to make more money which is come from stake holder companies as compensation. Historically, it is famous that Hitler in Germany deliberately manipulated news broadcasted to German citizens in order to enhance his despotic power. This indicates how biased the news media would be.
To sum up, everyone may hold different position on this issue. Yet, all things considered, I firmly believe that the news media is not trustworthy. This is because, it is quite possible to distort information to earn more profit and the news media is linked with many interest groups. | |
There is an ongoing debate over the pros and cons of the reliability of the news media. Some people believe that the news media tell us a wide variety of information in an objective viewpoint. However, I am against this stance because the information delivered by the news media could be distorted or biased in many ways.
To begin with, the news media sometimes conveys the information in an extremely sensational way. Nowadays, there are many private companies playing the role of news media and they try to maximize their profit to defeat other competitive companies. In order to draw people’s attention, the companies deliver more sensational news or extremely swelled (exaggerated도 괜찮을듯해요~<그냥의견>) information. Also, we can easily see a lot of surmised news. As long as the purpose of these companies is making more money, the credibility of information from the news media cannot be guaranteed.
However, even assuming the above reasons are plausible, some may argue that even though the news media just supplies somewhat modified facts, they are still facts exactly. Yet, I still put an emphasis on my idea because there is one more important matter to consider. (음…그냥 개인적으로 intro를 바디쓰시기 전에 또 쓰는건 불필요 한 것 같아요~소개글을 하시고 싶으시다면 한 sentence 로 줄이셔서 2nd body 에 붙이는 것 두 괜찮은듯해요~)
The news media is closely related to many stake holders. They can be connected with a government, other private companies. This makes it difficult to deliver information in an objective way. Not only sometimes distorts the news media a lot of social facts in order to avoid to be persecuted by a government, but also it modifies intentionally in order to make more money which is come from stake holder companies as compensation. (이 부분은 grammatically 수정이 필요한데요..어떻게 할지 모르겠어요 내용을 잘모르겠어서..)Historically, it is famous that Hitler in Germany deliberately manipulated news broadcasted to German citizens in order to enhance his despotic power. This indicates how biased the news media would be.
To sum up, everyone may hold different position on this issue. Yet, all things considered, I firmly believe that the news media is not trustworthy. This is because, it is quite possible to distort information to earn more profit and the news media is linked with many interest groups.