People have varying ideas about whether human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. Those who believe that it seems obvious that human activity has made the Earth a more convenient place for human habitation might agree to this statement. However, there are certainly negative aspect to this development and I assert that human activity are seriously threatening not only the environment but also people's lives. So, I disagree with this opinion.
Above all, human activities affect irrecover irrecoverable damage to the natural environment. It is generally thought that human activities their behavior makes improves our environment to improve beautifully and harmoniously ; however, It is the thinking of people who don't know the degree of environmental pollution's serious degree in the Earth. The best illustration of this is global warming. This dangerous phenomenon is directly affected by greenhouse gases which are produced when people burn oil and coal to generate electricity, use automobile, and heat houses. Also, people even cut down numorous trees which enable to reduce harmful gases. As a result of these human activities, the Earth is suffering from desertification, massive flood, and destruction (destroy의 명사형)/loss(이게 더 자연스러울듯?) destroying of habitat through unusual change of weather. For this reason, the idea that their activities have an negative affect on natural environment is one of the main reasons I vote against this statement.
In addition, human activities are threatening people's lives. Everyone know that the cars which we often use are is very useful and convenient ; however, they don't know that the more we use the cars, the more they become receiving a threat our lives. To take an example, the recent research by the company which associate with natural environment showed that more than 60 percent of the cause of deaths death's reason of humans was related to is affected by natural environmental pollution. OR... environmental pollution had to do with more than 60percent of people's cause of death. On top of that, the pollustion's major reason of pollution was the use is using of automobile which humans often use. This result not only announced that It is extreamly serious issue but also obviously showed that human activities are threatening their lives. In this respect, the thinking that human's lives are affected by human activities is one of the main reasons I cast doubt on athwart this announcement.
To sum up, I believe that human activities have destroyed the Earth which we live now. This is because it allows to demolishes both natural environment and human's lives. If we don't solve this trouble, more serious issues would happen in the Earth. |