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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
People learn more from their peers or co-workers than teachers or supervisors.
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It is often said that it is better for people to learn from their peers or friends because they are familiar with each other, leading to interact their knowledge effectively. However, contrary to this opinion, I strongly believe that learning from teachers or supervisors has more positive impacts on people. The rationale behind this is that learning from them is possible to acquire more information and acquisition of knowledge efficiently.
First of all, learning from teachers enable them to acquire more knowledge and information. The fundamental reason is that teachers and supervisors have professional knowledge and skills, unlike peers and friends. what is more, they have know-hows which can consider trial and error. For example when I was in a highschool, I was concerned about my course. At that time, I counsel with teachers about this matter, leading to solve the problem satisfactorily. Had I talked with friends, I can't solve this matter easily.
Moreover, learning from supervisors and teachers provides people with efficient information acquisition. This is largely because people can study in oppressive atmosphere and teachers have many experiences. On the other hand, as peers and friends hold equal position, they can't give academic environment and have few experiences. To illustrate through my university school, I had a trouble writing a research report. At first, I demanded for advice to friend, however, he give few support as we are similar to knowledges. Finally I asked professor to inform method of writing report, leading to be possible to write great report. In this respect, it will be much more efficient for people to learn from teachers.
In conclusion, without any doubt, I firmly believe that learning from older people is more beneficial to people. The reaons are that people can be taught to more knowledges through expertise and know-hows of teachers and guarantee efficient information acquisition. All in all, I believe that peole learn more from teachers or supervisors than their peers or co-workers. | |
It is often said that it is better for people to learn from their peers or friends because they are familiar with each other, leading to interact their knowledge effectively. However, contrary to this opinion, I strongly believe that learning from teachers or supervisors has more positive impacts on people. The rationale behind this is that learning from them is possible to acquire more information and acquisition of knowledge efficiently.
First of all, learning from teachers enable them to acquire more knowledge and information. The fundamental reason is that teachers and supervisors have professional knowledge and skills, unlike peers and friends. What is more, they have knowhow’s which can consider trial and error. For example when I was in a high school, I was concerned about my course. At that time, I counseled with teachers about this matter, leading to solve the problem satisfactorily. Had I talked with friends, I can't wouldn’t have solved this matter easily.
Moreover, learning from supervisors and teachers provides people with efficient information acquisition. This is largely because people can study in oppressive atmosphere and teachers have many experiences. On the other hand, as peers and friends hold equal positions, they can't give academic environment and have few experiences. To illustrate, through my university school, I had a trouble writing a research report. At first, I demanded asked for advice to a friend, however, he give gave me few supports as we are similar to knowledges. Finally I asked the professor to inform method of writing report, leading to be possible to write great report. In this respect, it will be much more efficient for people to learn from teachers.
In conclusion, without any doubt, I firmly believe that learning from older people is more beneficial to people. The reasons are that people can be taught to more knowledges through expertise and know-hows of teachers and guarantee efficient information acquisition. All in all, I believe that people learn more from teachers or supervisors than their peers or co-workers.