People have varying ideas about whether success relates doesn't related with luck. (어차피 ~인지 아닌지라는 뜻이니깐 whether 뒤에는 되도록 긍정으로 쓰는게 간결하고 이해하기 쉬워요. relates로 고쳤으면 뒷 문장들에 agree랑 disagree도 다 바꿔주세요) Those who believe that if people succeed, it is because of their efforts might agree to this statement. However, I assert that their opinion is incorrect. I disagree with this opinion. There are two reason why I hold this opinion. For one thing, success requires fortune/luck, and people cannot success only by striving for it. people should certainly have fortune in order to their success, and then if people only have effort, it is difficult to attain success.
Firstly, if people hope to reach the success which they wanted, they would also expect want fortune. Some people assert that those who rely only on luck would eventually fail. want luck will spoil. However, many results are often affected by fortune. For example, the recent study by the organ which is associated with education Association of Education / an educational organization showed that students, more than 60 percent of a class, think that test results do not always match the efforts they put to the preparation. they don't attain good test scores compared to their effort or they achieve good test score compared to their effort. This is because their score is affected not only by their effort but also by luck.
Secondly, as far as the idea that "endeavor brings success" is concerned, I disagree. OR Secondly, endeavor does not always guarantee success. as far as the idea that if people only have effort, it is difficult to attain success is concerned, I disagree with this statement. Some people say that people working hard having only effort can succeed more than people who believe that fortune will help them to succeed. However, the fortune always has something to do with intervene in their success. From my intimate neighbor's experience, he prepared the test of company which he wanted to be employed. His preparation's priod was He only prepared the test for just a month. Other people who took paticipate in the test with my neighbor prepared at least three months. When the results were out, shockingly, the only person who got the job was my neighbor. This example shows that person's success is hugely affected by luck. The test end and its result was announced. In the test which elect only a person, he entered employment in the company. This experience showed that person's success is affected by fortune.
To sum up, I assert that luck is an important part of success it is a incorrect statement because once people want to reach the success which they wanted, they would also want fortune and if people only take effort, attaining success is hard. |