Many people believe that longer human life span causes many problems such as a financial problem in which that government subsides would be depleted and manpower be wasted by taking care of old people and wasting of manpower for take care of old people. However, I disagree with the statement for the several following reasons.
First of all, longer human life span makes people live their lives more living life to the fullest and they can get a more time to spend more of their time relaxing. In other words, people would work hard and study hard during their younger ages young age for their later years. For To spend their later years in peace, people will put effort both in hard work and staying healthy work hard and stay healthy. For instance, my father strive to make a lot of money to cover for this golden years. a lot for pay the old-age pension and save money for their later years. As a result, this social phenomenon has motivated people to be is more productive, rather than caused causes many problems.
Secondly, longer human life span brings about creating new jobs. The growing number of old people would need to more develop welfare system and welfare facilities, and hire a lot social workers. Thus, this would reduce the number of unemployment. the governments would hire people for stay welfare policies well. In addition, they old people need more health care system and doctors, hospitals for their unstable health, so these field will boom as well. These are both This benefits in the economy, not to mention old people. develop economies and old people. In fact, when a geriatric hospital was built in our town, our local economy was being revived by a large amount of job creation.
Finally, as mentioned mentions above, our society is lives together and helps each other. And also this It is good news that human life span is getting longer. It makes people more cheerful and people have much more time to make a plans for their long later years. Thus, I firmly believe that people having extended has long life span has positive effects to be build a healthy society.
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