Some people say says that students should be take classes at least for 11 months per year for a better education. However, I believe that students need to enough time to participate in play other activities except other than for studying for the following two reasons. First, students can think creatively make creative thinking by engaging in playing other activities such as sports and discussion. Second, students can have enjoy their break time by doing playing other activities.
First of all, students need to enough time to play other activities except for education. :주제말고 소주제(students can think creatively by engaging...을 써주세요:)
Most of the classes make students do study assignment for all day and assign them homework. These This education system is responsible for student's non-creative thinking.
So it having a time for playing other activities is neccessary to spend time doing other activities for students to think more creatively/ think out of the box. have a creative thinking. Take a my case as an example; when I was middle school student, I was very stressful because of heavy assignments.
Among that assingment, there was were difficult math-problems. To solve them the problem, I sat was sitting in front of the dest for a 5 hours. However I could not solve that problem So, I went out to play soccer to relax my brain. After playing soccer, I returned to my dest in order to solve the math problem again. At the moment, I came up with the idea which can solve the problem. This is because I relaxed my brain just for one hour. So I went out to play soccer to rest my mind for a while. After playing for an hour, I returned to my desk, ready to tackle the problem again. Surprisingly, I came up with the solution right away. This was because playing soccer helped relax and freshen up my mind. |