According to a report, eighty percent of the people who are graduated from high school enter college. The reasons why many people enter college are to have a better job in the future and to heighten their value.(이해가 안됨)
Firstly, most people enter university in order to enter famous companies. Recently, college students prepare high score of English exam, various certifications, even club activities to enter good companies. This is because entering companies has become difficult for students due to recent economic depression. Thus, college students spend most of their time to prepare enrolling companies. I think the library in my college best demonstrates this point. While there used to be enough seats at the library to study for students when I was freshman in college five years ago, now there is only an insufficient number of seats for students. This is because freshman select to not enjoy college life but study to achieve various certifications like English exam. This tendency clearly represents that students invest their time to prepare for having good jobs after they graduate from their college.
Secondly, people enter university to enforce their value. In modern society, especially Korea, bias about people who do not enroll college exists over our whole community. It is true that people who did not graduate from university have difficulty in finding a satisfying job and finding a perfect spouse. According to a report, over ninety percent of successful Ceo in Korea graduated from the top universities. This clearly demonstrates how important people graduate from university is in Korean society. Furthermore, this encourages people to enter college to both upgrade their value and to succeed.
저는 개인적으로 이해하기 힘들었구요 ㅠ,ㅠ 내용이 왔다 갔다 한다고 해야되나?
그리고 에세이 내용이 뭐라할까? 그냥 반복하는 것 같애요; 첨삭하기가 힘들었어요 ㅠ저는 전문가가 아니거든요. 그리고 주어랑 동사 형태가 달라요 ㅠ
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