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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. | |
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Owning a business might be a common dream to every person in the world. Being a CEO allows them to control over the entire company system and employees, and to earn the most. However, I prefer to work for an employer for the following reasons. First, I enjoy a competitive working environment. Moreover, I am not cut out for taking full responsibility for business.
To begin with, I enjoy a competitive working environment. In retrospect, I realized that I perform much better in competitive surroundings rather than relaxed ones. I frankly do not have such good intelligence or ingenuity. Competition, however, has been the best source of motivation for my success. To give you an idea, as a freshman in high school, I was such a failure who barely got Cs on the exams. I was frustrated and attributed my low score to my poor intelligence. Fortunately, as I became sophomore, I met an industrious friend. To be a good friend of him, I tried not to fall behind and started to do my best on every subject. While competing with each other, we each became the 4th and 5th rank in the class. In this respect, competition is the motivator to me.
Furthermore, I am not the right person to be in charge of a business. I often feel uneasy when it comes to dealing with a project with full responsibility. I prefer helping and interacting with my colleagues, but being a leader panics me too much. To illustrate, I had a chance to become a manager of an airline. It was an online simulation which I had to manage the airline and tried to make profits as much as possible. Even if it was not real but just simulation, I lost a great deal of money and became the last ranked person. I was so embarrassed and decided not to become a CEO ever from then. If I had not been for the owner of the business but an employer, I would have contributed and helped the CEO to earn decent money. In this sense, I am not an appropriate person for flourishing in business.
To summarize, I am certainly fond of working for an employer due to the fact that I enjoy a competitive working environment and I am not cut out for taking full responsibility for business. Not all people have to be a CEO. Each person can play a significant role for the whole company’s prosperity. I hope many people change their minds from only longing for becoming the leader to being the necessary contributor.
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