Many people believe understand that T the news media always provides us with impartial information. From my point of view, however, they may manipulate much information in order to obtain profits. So I disagree with the above statement. ← 고칠게 없네요, 잘 쓰셨습니다. 참~ 이거 한가지는 아셔야 합니다.
저가 잘 썼다고해서 글이 완벽하다거나, 고칠 것이 없는 것은 아니라는 것. 저의 실력도 한계점이 낮아서요.
그 점에 대해서는 상당부분 감안하고 생각해 주세요. 위의 밑줄친 believe 도 좋고 understand 도 좋고요
First, broadcasting centers should try to attract their customers more than their rival centers. ← attract
하려고 노력해야 한다. 가 아니라 attract 해야 한다. 가 되야겠지요, 아니면 기억나세요, 안내 방송!
May I have your attention please..? 묻잖아요 이렇듯이
broadcasting centers should have televiewers' attention.
Thus, they want to send only information alluring people to us. them.
This is mostly because people can be fell in their strategies. ← 잘 쓰셨네요
This is mostly because people can easily be manipulated by gatekeeping.
[gatekeeping 이 뭔지 검색해서 찾아보세요] - 이 글을 쓰는데는 도움이 될듯 합니다.
시간이 이렇게 된지 몰랐네요, 나가야 해서요, 다 못 끝내서 지송합니다.
For instance, if there was a rumor that a renowned person marry another cerebrity, the news media would utterly focus on this issue to get viewers. People must be interested in this issue, and broadcasting centers would end up making manipulation for their benefits.
Second, viewers have no choice but to become passive because of the feature of the news that is introduced by TV or newspapers. It is very difficult that People who obtain the information judge whether this news gives us truth or not. For example, commercial advertisements on the Internet are criticized by many internet users, so they have to supply correct information for those users. However, the news media through TV or newspapers have not this requirement.
For these reasons, I strongly think that the media does not give us unbiased news. Most of us are allured by advertising strategies of media and misunderstand many information because broadcasting centers want to luring their customer more and more. On the whole, the news media give us information which is full of prejudice.
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