Traditionally, most Koreans think thought that people who want make large amounts of money are greedy and immoral not desirable. Because of Confucianism, most Koreans have not been taught to value about making money. In As a result, rich people were thought as same as greedy people. However, these days, those this bias has are changed. Now Many Koreans want to be richer, want make more money. Hence there is a lot of information about making money. On the other hand, some people still think that it is enough to earn moderate amount of money a comfortable living. They say if we have too much money, it makes us unhappy. Although two both opinions make sense, I think the second one is better than the first one.
Firstly, even though people have enough money, they will want more and more money. There are no limits to human’s greed. They cannot be satisfied satisfy with their state. For example, last summer vacation I worked part time. And I earned money enough to keep my everyday life. But I wanted more money than I needed. Hence I looked for the other job and I worked more. Because I had a second job, to work, I could not meet my friends, could not go to the movies and had no time to take a rest. The end of the summer vacation there was I had nothing except money. There was no memory or and no enjoyment in of my life. I realized that money is not everything./money is not the key to happiness.there is more than money. =>>이부분은 바디2의 소주제와 어울려요. 이야기가 약간 다른 방향으로 흘러가요. 욕심은 끝이 없다는 소주제에 stick해주세요. 아니면 소주제를: 돈을 버는데 치중하면 인생에 중요한 것들을 놓치게 된다. 로 바꿔도 좋을것같아요:)
In addition, more money cannot guarantee more happiness. Many people believe that if they have a lot of money they will be happier. But some study results of happiness say that having much money does not mean people are much happier. Many people think that the happiest country is the richest country like USA. According to a study, surprisingly, the happiest country in the world is Bangladesh. Bangladesh is one of the very poor countries. But most people in that country think they are happy. Through this result, we can know that happiness is not determined by money.
*중요한게 빠졌어요;ㅅ; 문제에서 analyze both viewpoints라고 나오잖아요 ~ 바디1,2내용을 붙이고 본인의 의견과 반대로 돈이 많으면 행복할수있는 이유도 분석해야해요 !
In conclusion, if we make money as much as we need, we can be happy. It is just up to you. Each of us has our own criterion of successfulness. Just be satisfied satisfy with your own state. If you are not satisfied do not satisfy with your state, you want more money and you will feel unhappy, but even if you make a lot of money, it would not make you happy since happiness is not all about money. But if you make a lot of money, it does not mean your happy. |