It is often said that people should do what they need to do than do what they like. However, I believe that it is better to do things to which what people want than to do things which people should do for the following two reasons: to increase satisfaction with their works and to succeed in modern society.
두문장이 약간 반복적이어서 variation을 주면 좋을 것 같아요. 예를 들어 어떤일들이 임무고, 어떤것들이 사람들이 하고싶은 일인지, 같은 조금은 구체적인 아니면 paraphrase된 문장이 있음 좋겠어요:)
To begin with, doing what people want to do enables them to be satisfied with their works. This is because when people do work what they like, people try to do their best. Thus, it is important for people to do what they like. Let me explain an example on my case. When I was in high school, I had to take classes even I did not want to such as mathematics and science. So I did not study the subjects hard and I could not usually get good grades in them. However, entering a university, I could choose what subjects I wanted to take such as Psychology and Sociology. The subjects led (과거형) leaded me to do my best, and also I got great scores and I was really fulfilled satisfied with them / which was rewarding. with them! If I had not had the right of selection to subjects, I could not have had the sense of satisfaction.
In addition, being able to work in the area that people like is the key to success. it is the key to success that people do what they want to do. It is obvious that many successful people work at fields where they like. Therefore, doing what people want to do motivate people to go to the way of success. According to a study conducted by Seoul National University of Korea in 2008, 70 percent of CEOs who succeed work what they want to do. |