When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
1. 열심히 일하는 것은 누구나 할 수 있는 기본적인 조건이다.
2. 행운은 기본적으로 열심히 일하여 바탕을 만들었을 때 찾아와 성공에 이르게 한다.
“Do your best”. You have might listen this sentence from your teacher, boss or parents. Many people say that if you want to be successful, only hard working is the way. According to their word, a lot of young people try to study or work hard. Needless to say, hard work is important. However, I think success is made from basic effort and plus some luck. I will give you two reasons why I think that.
To begin with, working hard is a fundamental condition which is anyone can do. For example, let us student who prepare a national examination. There are a great number of students studying the exam. Specially, according to a survey, most of the students take a long period for studying. 53% of the students take over 3 years, 27% take under 3 years and only 8% of students take under a year. I think they certainly did study hard but other condition did not help them. For instance, I think, luck!
위 topic에 대해서 브레인스토밍을 하려는데, 아무리 생각해도 2개의 근거가 떠오르지 않더라구요.. 그래서 거의 억지로 짜맞추어 넣었는데, 역시나 글 전개를 못하겠더라구요^^; 브레인스토밍좀 도와주세요!
그리고, 저렇게 수치를 이용해서 영작을 하고싶은데, % 넣어서 글을 어떻게 써야할지 모르겠네요~~
예를들면, “조사에 따르면, 응답자의 30 %이상은 ~라고 하였고, ~한 응답자는 단지 20%미만에 불과했다” 이런식.. 도와주세용!
“Do your best”. You have might have listened to this sentence from your teacher, boss or parents. Many people say that if you want to be successful, only hard working is the way working hard is the only way to achieve this. According to their words, a lot of young people try to study or work hard. Needless to say, hard work is important. However, I think success is made from basic efforts and plus some luck. I will give you two reasons why I think that.
To begin with, working hard is a fundamental condition which is anyone can do. For example, let us students who prepare for the college entrance exams national examination. There are a great number of students studying for this the exam. Specially, according to a survey, most of the students take a long period for studying. 53% of the students take over 3 years, 27% take under 3 years and only 8% of students take under a year. I think they certainly did study hard but other condition did not help them. For instance, I think, luck!