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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a more modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. | |
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A modern apartment building is undoubtedly, a better place to live because traditional houses are often uncomfortable. Modern apartments also tend to be cleaner and easier to maintain, which distinctively raise them above traditional houses.
Generally traditional houses are quite uncomfortable. Old ones in particular, are enormous in size and this does not offer the coziness of a home, that my apartment does. Traditional houses also lag behind in terms of modern technology. Modern apartments are fully equipped with the technology, that some traditional houses, clearly, do not have. Most up-to-date modern inventions can lead a better quality of life.
Secondly, almost all modern apartments are cleaner. A traditional house could have been built many years ago. This age could have degraded the quality of the house. For instance, roofs might leak and corners may have decayed, giving off unpleasant smells. Modern apartments, on the other hand, are new, which means you do not have to worry about rotten corners, peeled walls, etc.
In addition, modern apartments are easier to maintain. An apartment simply needs house cleaning;vacuuming for an hour should be enough. Traditional houses, however, requires a lot more care like mowing the lawn. They also do not have apartment guardians that modern apartments possess.
Overall, I would definitely choose a modern apartment over a traditional house. Traditional houses can be utterly uncomfortable. Modern apartments are cleaner and easier to maintain too. Some may prefer traditional houses but I favour modern apartments. |
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A modern apartment building is undoubtedly, a better place to live because traditional houses are often uncomfortable. Modern apartments also tend to be cleaner and easier to maintain, which distinctively raise them above traditional houses.
Generally traditional houses are quite uncomfortable. Old ones in particular, are enormous in size and this does not offer the coziness of a home, that my apartment does. Traditional houses also lag behind in terms of modern technology. Modern apartments are fully equipped with the technology that some traditional houses, clearly, do not have. Most up-to-date modern inventions can lead to a better quality of life.
Secondly, almost all modern apartments are cleaner. A traditional house could have been built many years ago. This age could have degraded the quality of the house. For instance, roofs might leak and corners may have decayed, giving off unpleasant smells. Modern apartments, on the other hand, are new, which means that you do not have to worry about rotten corners, peeled walls, etc.
In addition, modern apartments are easier to maintain. An apartment only simply needs simple house cleaning such as vacuuming for an hour should be enough. Traditional houses, however, requires a lot more care like mowing the lawn. They also do not have apartment guardians that modern apartments possess.
Overall, I would definitely choose a modern apartment over a traditional house. Traditional houses can be utterly uncomfortable. Modern apartments are cleaner and easier to maintain too. Some may prefer traditional houses but I favor modern apartments.