agree. 1. change appointment whenever. - example, my experience, I changed plan with phone call. 2. reduce worries about family - according research from TK Univ. 70% like having cell phone. worry-> can do nothing -> ni freedom
It is often said that people can be free with their cellphone. Although some people disagree with the statement, I firmly believe to be free people need cellphone. There are several reasons, but two of the most important ones are as follows. First people can change their plan by phone call. Moreover, cellphone reduces people's worries about their families.
Most of all, people can have flexible schedule with their cellphone. In other words, whenever people need to change their appointments with their friends or families, they would change or prolong the appointments by only a phone call. If all people have their own cellphone, it may take just a minute. However, if people don't have cellphones, they have to keep their promises like having a dinner with their family because they can't let all members of member of their families the fact they need to change the promise on the day. For example, when I was in middle school, I didn't have a cellphone. Even if though my friends wanted to make a plan for me, I had to go home to have a dinner with my family because I couldn't announce it to my family. However, when entering a high school, I bought a cellphone and I realized why everyone needs a cellphone because I could call to my family anytime and get a allowance not to go home for the a dinner with my family. Therefore, the cellphones would make people free in their lives.
In addition, with the cellphone, people can get out of the worries about their families. Most people are worrying about their family members when they come home lately. If there a your father who always come home at 6PM, (무슨 말인지 모르겠습니다)you may consider that he would come home at the same time tomorrow. However, if he come home at 7PM tomorrow, you would concern your father and be wondering why he is late. The cellphone could get rid of the concern from you in that you can call to him and ask what happened to him. (if를 너무 많이 쓰지 않나 생각해봅니다) According to a research from Tokyo University in 2009, more than 70% of people were using their cellphone to call to their family members for their main purpose. Also 50% of them answered that when they don't have their cellphone, they most wondered how their siblings and parents are doing. Furthermore, 30% of them responded that they couldn't do nothing when they lost their phone, because they worried their family too much. Thus, people would get freedom physically as well as mentally.
In conclusion, I strongly support that the cellphone is a necessity for people to have freedom. If people have a cellphone, they could call whenever they need to change their schedules, Additionally, it helps them to reduce their concerns that make them do nothing.
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