I agree that a city should try to preserve its old, historic building rather than destroy them and replace them with modern buildings. Some people may mention that modern buildings in a city make the appearance of the city more beautiful. However, the a city utilizes old, historic places as a good sightseeing source. Also, the city provides their children who lives there lived the city with a good educational environment.
First of all, the city could utilize old, historic places as a good sightseeing source. Some citizens may say that it is difficult to develop historic places. However, old and historic places itself could exist as a meaningful sightseeing source. For example, the Insa-dong street which maintains the had a Korean traditional Korean life style could be itself a sightseeing place. Foreign visitors could easily find the place because the place is was located in Seoul, the capital of Korea/a big city in Korea.
Second, the city can provide their children who lives in the city/ lives there lived the city with a good educational environment. Some people may say that it is little effect that students do not learn much by seeing the old, historical sites. However, a city which has old, historic places has various benefits. Among these benefits, the places help students to easily understand historical facts. In fact, many students who study in the school are have difficulty in memorizing historical facts. Also history teachers had have a hard time teaching students with only books. However, if some old, historic places exist near the school, they can visit the place and directly see the historical places. Naturally, teachers and students both will be satisfied satisfy by seeing the historical places rather than just studying them through books.
In conclusion, I agree that a city should try to preserve its old, historic building rather than destroy them and replace them with modern buildings. It This is because the city could utilize old, historic places as a good sightseeing source. Also the city can provide their children who lives in the city lived the city with a good educational environment.
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