After the Industrial Revolution, people began begin to develop the earth quickly. They started to build buildings and factories. Most people wanted the society to be industrial. want to make the industrial society. For these efforts, some places become a better place. However, it makes this has caused some serious problem to preserve out our ecosystem. I firmly believe that the Earth is being harmed by human activity.
To begin with, there is a lot of air pollution by human. When we walk along the street in the city, usually we can usually see the smog, which is dangerous to us. According to the news, automobile exhaust fumes exhausted from automobiles are blamed as one of the major causes of smog. Also, Most of harmful chemical substances are created by factories and automobiles. And it gives negative effect to they negatively affects us. The ozonosphere is being damaged by human activity such as smog of factory or automobile.
In addition, ecosystem is destroyed by human activity. Being the industrial society, we become having the imprudence to develop anywhere. Living in an industrial society, we have become imprudent enough to develop anywhere. As a result of that activity, most of the animals lost their habitats. At last, it brings about destruction of ecosystem. To be specific, statistics of a research about the ecosystem shows researching about ecosystem figures show that ecosystem had has been destroyed by human imprudent development. =좀더 specific하게 쓰셨으면 ~ ^^
Finally, human activities are threatening our lives. The cause of people's death is human activities. For example, Most of the weapons are originated by human inventions. In particular, the weapons of mass destruction results from human inventions. Also, some inventions such as automobiles cause the accidents which could even kill people. is the reason of death. For these reasons, human activities menace our lives.
To conclude, the Earth is being damaged by human action or activities. This is because there is a lot of air pollution, the ecosystem is destroyed, and some inventions menace our lives. So, I strongly believe that human activity has some brought danger to the Earth. We need to watch the conservation of nature with deep concern and try to preserve the nature.
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