Nowadays, we live in the information age which means it is important to factor that acquire a lot of knowledge for living in many different fields. And also having large amount (정보는 셀수없으니까)number of information helps people live better lives. In old saying “the more the better”, alike The old saying "the more the better" applies to this statement well since having more information is better than the having less for the following several reasons.
First of all, in old saying “the more the better” people strive to for acquire many different knowledge in many field. Actually, someone who has amount of knowledge can live in comfort than those who do not have much knowledge having the less and also it’s very useful tool for better live. For example, if someone who encounter some problems, the person already know that how to solve the problem with his/her knowledge. And not only that, but also having a lot of information would be useful in many field such as cooking, traveling, general social life.
-너무 general 해요~ 구체적인 내용을 안쓰면 점수가 잘안나오더라구요 ;ㅅ;
Secondly, having a lot of information would help to be successful. Many people want to going to college and expect that to gain a lot of expertise. In fact, a student who has a large amount of information in what they study would achieve good results in exam. In other words, having a high grade in college has leads to more opportunities to get a good job.(여기서도 논리적으로 말이 약간 안되요. 결과가 좋으면 좋은 직장을 얻을 기회가 많다 ~ 잖아요. 뒤에선 더블메이저가 유리했다는 거니깐 밑줄친 부분도 지식이 많을 수록 기회가 많다고 수정해주세요:) For instance, in my case, my major was fashion design, and my minor was fashion merchandising in college. After graduated, I had could have a lot of chance for job interview than others, who had has only one major, and I could also get have got a job more quickly than others.
Finally, as pointed out above, having substantial amount of information in general field or in professional field makes our lives rich and helps to be successful. Thus, I disagree with this (무엇을 가르키는지 명확하지 않아요 ~ 다시 언급해주세요 !) the statement that having substantial amount of information may cause a problem and I firmly believe that having a lot of information is has very useful and benefitial for our lives. |