■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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In the rapidly changing world, the velocity of change is getting higher ever than before, besides obtaining of information is a obvious to catch up the global world. Techenology plays a key role in getting the information. In this regard, I strongly believe that students nowadarys can learn more information and lear it more quickly with the help of techonology for the following reasons.
To begin with, the role of computer as the symbol of technology is considerable when it comes to gaining the information faster. This is due to the fact that it is possible to access internet everywhere in order to get a great deal of information in modern society. To illustatre, according to a recent study from Seoul National University Reserch, every one of four possess computers in the world. There is more interesting facts, everyone has their own computer in Korea. It means many people have more than one computer. To be specific, most people around me possess two computers one at home, another at work. In this sense, the accessbility to internet makes people get more information faster.
Another reason is that if students can use the books only to get information, learning can be behind. This is because without thechnology, the learning method will be limited by reading books or people. So to get the condense information by reading books usually takes long time or meeting people such as mentors and professors compsume a lot of time. To illustatrate, when I was young I only learned by books, It brought me sometimes narrow information thus, at that moment, I felt like I had a narrow viewpoint because of information's shotage.
As I have mentioned above, computer and internet helped student learn quickly, compared to the situation able to learn by reading books and people. The advancement of technology is improving students to learn faster and get more information. All in all, I totally support the idea that students nowdays can learn more information and more faster with the aids of technology. | |
늘 부족한 느낌...시간도 많이 걸리고, 학원 안다니고, 독학 하려니 시간이 너무 많이 걸리네요.
이번주 시험보고, 학원 다닐것을 고려해 봐야겠네요.
혹시 오프타픽 아닌가요? ㅠ.,ㅠ 읽어주시는 분 감사...부족한 부분 코멘트 주시면, 더욱 감사합니다.
참 이 타픽으로 이렇게 접근하는 것도 괜찮나요?
본문1) 테크놀러지로 많은 정보 배운다
2) 테크놀러지 빨리 정보를 배울 수 있다.
3) 테크놀러지 없으면, 정보획득에 어려움이 많다.
만약 이런구도로 이야기를 풀어내는 것도 괜찮나요?