■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Being happy with a job is more important than having a high salary. | |
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These days many people think that money is the most important aspect of life. Therefore, people want to have a job which earns a lot of money. They are only considered about how much money they earn and how to promote early than others. However, in my opinion, the happiness is not depending on what you have got or how much money do they earn. People should be happy while they are working.
First, it is very important that satisfy to their work. Despite their work is really hard to do, they feel very happy if they satisfy to their work. Also, if they do not pay enough to enjoy luxurious life style, they would not blame anything they do. For instance, I am not having a job right now, but I am majoring in architecture and I want to be an architect. Actually it is really hard to design a buildings, but I really enjoy doing my school assignments and respect other architects. Thus, I think being happy with a job is more important than earning a lot of money.
Second, people who have a job with a high salary could be unhappy because they do not satisfy their work. There are many people who had been suicide because of a depression. According to Korean times, 7 percent of people who killed themselves is who earns a lot of money in their job. They were not happy and always suffered from their work. Therefore, the happiness and satisfaction are the most important factors to have a job.
In conclusion, I definitly believe that earing a lot of money is not important to choose a job. We have to consider about how much we can enjoy and satisfy about that job. If people only consider about the money, finally they will realize that they were wrong. | |
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